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Post by apoc40 on Jan 23, 2014 23:35:43 GMT -5
P 162
"Assisting her in these efforts if the Church of Transcendence" probably should read is
I'll post any more I find here.
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Post by apoc40 on Jan 24, 2014 0:01:34 GMT -5
P 184 Final sentence trails into a hyphenated word, then doesn't pickup on p 185 or 186. "achievements of the Knight-
Never done a layout for a book before so I'm absolutely not an expert, but I'd recommend not hyphenating words across pages. I've seen a couple other places where it happens, and to me it just doesn't as read well.
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Post by Mark Plemmons on Jan 24, 2014 14:35:53 GMT -5
Thanks! And you're right about the wordflow. Along with the index, that will be one of the last things I do before the book goes to the printer, so I can be sure all the text is complete.
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